I learned about Langston Hughes’ poem A Dream Deferred a long time ago. Just those words. That is all I needed. The possibilities (it’s about civil rights, I realize) of what they referred to is vast, and that poem was the inspiration for this one. A Dream Deferred is a masterful little piece of writing. Just three words captured my mind.
Can dreams become like a sickness? Can they harm us somehow? In today’s climate, the “you-can-do-it” spirit remains strong any place where advice is given. This is a good thing, right? Yes.
What happens to dreams that are deferred over and over? These are the types of questions I have, and I wonder if others can relate. Things we want can motivate us. Also, they can act like some heavy weight tied to our necks. This poem is about dreaming. As always, I do not claim to know even the basics about poetry. I hope you like it.
What happens to a dream uncured?
rolling like pastures past a crooked stream
falling away from distant eyes
dried and withered past the sunny gleam
Where do dreamers finally go?
their wagers unreal to doubting minds
fragments of colors left behind
sharp and cutting like ice, not snow
What does passion finally reap?
quiet mutters from unfriended souls
warring, ghastly, ghostly haunts
strewn with relics, pretended cheap
What do they say of the dreaming dead?
all for nothing, and nothing left
newsmen did not record or recite
no reasons discovered for a blighted life
What of the living dreamers are left?
Confined to parlors treated and tossed
tested, rested, observed, and lost
by official thieves with forgotten theft
What of the dreamers, who halt and yield?
no burden no journey, no conscious burns
no star to keep, no path unkept
buried among the once-sacred hills
The dreams uncured return unkind
or fire the soul to the last resign
scurry seething, until a new birth
or reimagined defeated, with glories sublime
THANKS FOR READING.
Thank you for this thought-provoking poem. Not only can I learn more about me and my dreams, but I see I need to ensure that they are not deferred. I need to bring them out for all to see. They are worthy and will surely plant epiphany seeds, much like your words do for me.
I am a writer. By definition, I am a dreamer: dreaming that my words will be received in the way I intend.